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Wednesday, February 16, 2005

{what's that Latin word for happy accident?}

so I was trying to fix something formatting-wise on the blog (like why are all of the links down at the bottom now?) and of course messed up something else and all my line breaks disappeared, gone, smooshed together.

and I think maybe I like this poem better that way. thoughts?

write this without using the word EMPTY

A: what would envy do in an empty room? B: describe the shape of something C:
why won’t the door open? A: stands in a corner one shoulder to each wall
D: the memory of a taste or texture in the mouth E: a sound in the distance
and its echo B: triangles of ice like pineapple in red jello F: what’s on the floor?
G: where is the sound coming from? H: envy makes a noise I: something envy
remembers J: why not try the window? K: something to do with the temperature
L: something to do with the noise M: did you assume envy was alone?
C: locked from the outside -- by whom? D: the rasp of rice not steamed long enough
N: (what would want want?) E: rifleshot or firecracker F: spent casing,
a broken lego piece O: use the words carbuncle and flirtation G: six feet
from the window H: arr arr arr arr, low in the throat, phlegmy I: always
the A minus, minus P: what is envy’s prayer here? J: the window painted
shut, black K: the late sun, a magnifying glass L: report and its echo, a shot
M: who else would be there?
who else throw the lock?
N: everything
O: carbuncle to lip gloss, a flirtation
Q: refer to the first line
Q?/P?: forgive us our trespasses

research: envy and suicide/death, tabanca, jealous rage and murder-suicide

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